http://www.tangolimadeltaromeo.com/2009/01/13/as-seen-on-tv/ Short Fiction, Essays, and Other Writings Wed, 08 Sep 2010 13:52:05 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 http://www.tangolimadeltaromeo.com/2009/01/13/as-seen-on-tv/comment-page-1/#comment-769 Brilliam Wed, 14 Jan 2009 15:29:16 +0000 http://blog.tangolimadeltaromeo.com/?p=17#comment-769 I quite enjoyed reading this last night, but I wanted to talk to you about the last line; it sort of feels like a punchline, as if everything leading up to it were a joke, and, in my opinion, it robs the piece of perceived value in doing so. Now, to be fair, I don't really know a better way to end it, but just something to think about? I quite enjoyed reading this last night, but I wanted to talk to you about the last line; it sort of feels like a punchline, as if everything leading up to it were a joke, and, in my opinion, it robs the piece of perceived value in doing so. Now, to be fair, I don’t really know a better way to end it, but just something to think about?

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